I was watching my favorite part of Moulin Rouge! the other day – basically, the elephant scenes. I noticed a very interesting pattern:
They introduce a problem, then they solve it. Then, as soon as that one is solved, they introduce another problem, and then they solve that. Lather, rinse, repeat, for about 20-25 minutes. Behold:
Problem | Outcome/Solution |
Satine and Christian are in the elephant for different reasons. She wants to seduce him, and he wants to inspire her with his poetry. | She fakes an orgasm for a while, until he bursts into song and makes her fall in love with him. |
She realizes he’s not the Duke, freaks out, and then the Duke shows up while he’s still in there. | They run around for a while, trying to divert him, until they finally get him out of the room. Then … |
Satine passes out, and the Duke returns to get his hat, only to discover her in the arms of another man. | The emergency rehearsal! Generally, the Duke likes it. |
While everyone else is celebrating, Christian tries to write, but all he can think about is Satine. | He goes to visit her, while she’s lamenting and dreaming. |
She’s not allowed to fall in love. But a life without love, that’s terrible! | He sings for her again. She falls in love again. He’s going to be bad for business, she can tell. |
My favorite part of Robert McKee’s Story is that story happens in the gap between expectation and result. Any time you think you know – or even more critically, any time the characters think they know – what’s going to happen, we need to throw them a curve ball, which they then need to figure out how to solve. That’s done here in spades, and this happens to be one of my favorite movie sequences – I’ve watched Moulin Rouge! in its entirety maybe four or five times, but I’ve watched that sequence closer to four or five dozen.
Of course, there are a lot of other things going on here, than just the problem-solution mass. It’s also visually stunning, outstandingly well-choreographed, hilariously funny, and thematically brilliant. Plus, Nicole Kidman is hot.
But we could all stand to take a page from Moulin Rouge! and introduce more problems into our screenplays that our characters have to solve.