Thoughts on The Avengers

May 9, 2012

I didn’t grow up as a comic book geek. I grew up as a fan of comic book movies, worshiping at the feet of Richard Donner and Tim Burton, but I never really read the comic books themselves. I was, and still am, barely conscious of the Justice League of America comics, and was even less cognizant of the Avengers.

And yet, at the end of the first Iron Man movie, when Samuel L. Jackson appeared with those immortal words, “I’m here to talk to you about the Avenger Initiative,” I was every bit as giddy as all the fanboys who’ve been reading the comics for years. Why? Because I knew, as did everyone else, that it was the start of something huge.

Many years ago at Comic-Con I had heard screenwriter Zak Penn hint at creating a horizontal world in the comic book universe. At the time, I had no clue what was coming. But he sure did. According to this ScreenwritingU interview with him, he was hired years ago as the one to manage creating a single narrative thread through all the comics; to make sure that each movie adequately set up what would culminate in The Avengers.

It was a job very, very well done. One of the biggest challenges, I think, of a movie like this is figuring out how to stuff ten characters, each a leading man in his own right, into a single story. As Joss Whedon put it, “Too much is going to throw people, and at the same time, you don’t want to leave anybody in the cold.” So you start with the villain, bring in the heroes one by one, create a bunch of interpersonal conflict among the heroes themselves, and have the ultimate battle turn into a war. Throw in a whole lot of humor thanks to a rewrite by Joss himself and the presence of king of the one-liners Robert Downey, Jr., and you’ve got the makings of a hit.

MAJOR SPOILER ALERT

As a writer, I think my favorite part of the whole movie was the decision to kill off Agent Coulson. I was commenting to someone the other day that I stopped watching Fringe the third time Olivia went into the hallucinogenic tank of doom, because they kept trying to convince us that it was so dangerous, but she ended up being fine each time, and we knew she was going to die anyway because she was the lead character and you don’t kill off your lead character in the first season. Meanwhile, I watch Grey’s Anatomy religiously, because they create characters that I care about, and then (sometimes) kill them off. When an artist actually proves that he’s willing to kill someone you care about it, the stakes become that much more real. Agent Coulson, having assembled the Avengers over four years’ worth of movies, was not someone we expected to die. So when he did, we totally bought into the emotional stakes — i.e., that he was important enough to all the other characters to have them avenge his death.

END SPOILER ALERT

I’m positively ecstatic that this gamble on the part of Marvel and Disney has paid off. A few years ago I heard a screenwriter for some comic book movie (don’t remember which one) say that when he was writing the screenplay, he begged the studio, “Let me put a blind lawyer named Murdoch just in this one scene.” In the comics they do that stuff all the time, but in the movie world they were seen, for the longest time, as completely different properties and didn’t want to cross them over. The studio refused. And now creating this horizontal world as they have, we’re seeing how powerful it can be.

Given the tag during the credits, and this summer’s auspiciously-timed reboot of Spiderman (only five years after the last Spiderman movie, the same time difference as between 2003′s Hulk and its 2008 reboot The Incredible Hulk), I’ve heard some people speculate that Spiderman will be joining the Avengers for the sequel. That sequel has been confirmed, so now our job is to look for other clues — like, for example, a reboot of The Fantastic Four.


The Art of the Seduction

July 22, 2010

Love scenes are notoriously difficult to write. Anything that involves seduction, romance, or sex, has been overdone to the point of cliché, and figuring out a way to convey those moments creatively takes some work. So whenever I come across a particularly good love/sex scene, I remember.

Enter Firefly. My wife and I are making our way through the DVD of the one and only season, and we came across this gem, which I had to share.

Some background: Mal is the captain of a crew of space pirates, and in an unusual arrangement, he has leased a room in his ship to Inara, a high-class prostitute. By this point in the season, there’s been some sexual tension between the two, but their relationship has remained exclusively love-hate and celibate. In this episode, a friend of Inara’s from “companion” school contacts her for help, because the lives of her and the girls in her not-so-high-class outer-planet brothel are in jeopardy.  To this point, Mal has shown no interest whatsoever in Nandi.

INT. NANDI’S ROOM – NIGHT

It’s very late, and Mal and Nandi are on the couch. He throws back a shot. They’ve both been drinking for a while.

NANDI
It was the dulcimerMAL
The Dulcimer drove you out of Sihnon.
What, did you kill a dulcimer in a
terrible passion?

NANDI
(smiles)
Actually, yes.

MAL
And that Dulcimer’s family is looking
to get even. I get it.

NANDI
I was at practice. You never stop
practicing, you know, not a true
companion. Some baroque place, and
the instructor keeps saying “You’re
playing it, not feeling it”. And the
fifth time he said it I took the damn
thing and smashed it into kindling.
And that’s when it occurred to me
that a companion’s life might just be
a little too constricting.

She crosses to the dresser to pour two more shots.

NANDI

So I trucked out to the border,
learned to say “ain’t” and came to
find work. Found this place.MAL
It’s a nice place.

NANDI
It was a dungheap. Run by a pig who
had half the girls strung out on
drops. There’s no Guild out here;
they let men run the houses, and they
don’t ask for references. We didn’t
get along.

MAL
Where’s he at now?

NANDI
(sitting)
Let’s just say he ain’t playing the
dulcimer anymore either.

They clink glasses. Knock ‘em back.

MAL
You are a remarkable woman, you don’t
mind my saying.NANDI
Long as it’s you saying it, and not
my fine rice wine.

MAL
It takes more’n a few drinks to
render my judgement blurry. What
about you? Am I getting any prettier?

NANDI
By the minute.

She is so sweetly seductive that they hold on each other a moment. Then he breaks it, all conscience.

MAL
(rising)
I should check the barricades, make
sure everyone’s ready to –NANDI
Everyone’s asleep. Well, them as
can, night before a fight.

She heads for the dresser, to pour again.

NANDI (cont’d)
Can you?MAL
What?

NANDI
Sleep?

Another beat, as that loaded question settles in. Mal’s reply is intimate in tone as well, as he steps forward.

MAL
Miss Nandi, I have a confession to
make.NANDI
Maybe I should get the Shepherd.

MAL
Well, I ain’t sinned yet, and I’d
feel more than a little awkward
having him here when I do.

NANDI
You expect to accomplish something
sinful then, do you?

MAL
If I’m overstepping my bounds, you
let me know.

NANDI
< Extraordinarily impatient Buddha >
[jen mei NAI-shing duh FWO-tzoo],
Malcolm, I been waiting for you to
kiss me since I showed you my guns –

They’re kissing. It’s soft, but not without heat. He pulls away, looks at her.

NANDI (cont’d)
You okay with this?MAL
I’m just waiting to see if I pass
out. Long story.

NANDI
I want you to bed me.

MAL
I guess I mean to.

A small beat, as he strokes her hair.

NANDI
I ain’t her.MAL
Only people in this room is you and
me.

She hands him one of the newly filled shotglasses, takes one herself

NANDI
So, my child… How long has it been
since your last confession?MAL
Longer than I care to tell.

NANDI
You gonna remember where everything
goes?

MAL
Let’s just say I plan to take it real
slow.

They drink. They kiss. They sink to the bed.

What makes this scene so incredible is the subtext. The entire scene is loaded with his feelings for Inara, and we know it. When he tells her she’s a remarkable woman, it’s not an attempt to sleep with her, it’s a genuine compliment. And then, of course, there’s the double-entendre of the “confession”.

Great stuff. Shame the series didn’t last. But keep this in mind, as you’re writing love scenes, never to have the people say what they actually think.


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